Peril from the Stars - Revision history

BerylRoll at 14:05, 16 February 2026

2026-02-16T14:05:50Z

Doglunchuk: /* Errors */

2024-07-14T07:31:44Z

Errors

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	*Despite them being described as such, Bombshell's wing casings are never drawn open when he is flying.		*Despite them being described as such, Bombshell's wing casings are never drawn open when he is flying.
	*If you throw the homing beacon at Starscream on page 44, you are described as being "too insignificant to matter" and so he fails to notice you. However on page 39, when you throw a cerebro-shell at Bombshell, Starscream sees you immediately and warns the Insecticon.		*If you throw the homing beacon at Starscream on page 44, you are described as being "too insignificant to matter" and so he fails to notice you. However on page 39, when you throw a cerebro-shell at Bombshell, Starscream sees you immediately and warns the Insecticon.
	*On page 28, Jazz describes Starscream as being the most powerful and cruellest Decepticon. While the ~~later~~ might be debatable, it seems unlikely that Starscream would be considered more powerful than Megatron.		*On page 28, Jazz describes Starscream as being the most powerful and cruellest Decepticon. While the latter might be debatable, it seems unlikely that Starscream would be considered more powerful than Megatron.


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Emvee at 13:32, 21 August 2021

2021-08-21T13:32:29Z

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	::::::'''''You suggest to Jazz that he should try to outrun Bombshell.'''''		::::::'''''You suggest to Jazz that he should try to outrun Bombshell.'''''
	::::::But the air-bound Bombshell easily overtakes Jazz. Once Bombshell is ahead of you, he switches to robot mode and begins to bombard Jazz with [[Mortar cannon\|mortar shells}}. For you and Jazz, this is…		::::::But the air-bound Bombshell easily overtakes Jazz. Once Bombshell is ahead of you, he switches to robot mode and begins to bombard Jazz with [[Mortar cannon\|mortar shells]]. For you and Jazz, this is…

	::::::'''THE END'''		::::::'''THE END'''

Emvee: link

2021-08-21T13:12:46Z

link

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	::::::'''''You suggest to Jazz that he should try to outrun Bombshell.'''''		::::::'''''You suggest to Jazz that he should try to outrun Bombshell.'''''
	::::::But the air-bound Bombshell easily overtakes Jazz. Once Bombshell is ahead of you, he switches to robot mode and begins to bombard Jazz with mortar shells. For you and Jazz, this is…		::::::But the air-bound Bombshell easily overtakes Jazz. Once Bombshell is ahead of you, he switches to robot mode and begins to bombard Jazz with [[Mortar cannon\|mortar shells}}. For you and Jazz, this is…

	::::::'''THE END'''		::::::'''THE END'''

Abates: /* Synopsis */

2015-09-29T08:19:41Z

Synopsis

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	::::::''(From [[#page 63\|page 63]] or [[#page 64\|page 64]])''		::::::''(From [[#page 63\|page 63]] or [[#page 64\|page 64]])''

	::::::You and Jazz crouch close to the observatory’s entrance, and hear Starscream explaining his plan to your Uncle Jack. The Decepticon is after a weapons pod that was launched from the planet Cybertron millions of years ago, and has been orbiting the Sun since then. Thanks to the observatory’s telescope, Starscream has managed to locate the long-though lost pod. Now Starscream plans to use it to to rule over both Transformers and humans alike! Jazz turns to you and confirms that Starscream’s ramblings speak the truth. The two of you must move to stop the evil robot’s machinations. '''[[#page 66\|page 66]]'''		::::::You and Jazz crouch close to the observatory’s entrance, and hear Starscream explaining his plan to your Uncle Jack. The Decepticon is after a weapons pod that was launched from the planet Cybertron millions of years ago, and has been orbiting the Sun since then. Thanks to the observatory’s telescope, Starscream has managed to locate the long-though lost pod. Now Starscream plans to use it to rule over both Transformers and humans alike! Jazz turns to you and confirms that Starscream’s ramblings speak the truth. The two of you must move to stop the evil robot’s machinations. '''[[#page 66\|page 66]]'''

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Ascendron: /* Synopsis */

2015-03-30T02:26:23Z

Synopsis

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	::::'''''You tell Jazz to continue towards the observatory.'''''		::::'''''You tell Jazz to continue towards the observatory.'''''
	::::As Jazz passes your uncle’s car, he yelps out in pain, and sparks begin to fly out of his circuitry. Jazz berates himself for having recklessly charged into what turned out to be a null-field. This field had knocked out the ignition in your uncle’s car, and now has burned out Jazz’s [[vital circuits]], preventing him from transforming into his robot mode. Before you can ask what any of this means, you spot something up ahead that drives all other thoughts from your mind. '''[[#page 48\|page 48]]'''		::::As Jazz passes your uncle’s car, he yelps out in pain, and sparks begin to fly out of his circuitry. Jazz berates himself for having recklessly charged into what turned out to be a null-field. This field had knocked out the ignition in your uncle’s car, and now has burned out Jazz’s [[circuits\|vital circuits]], preventing him from transforming into his robot mode. Before you can ask what any of this means, you spot something up ahead that drives all other thoughts from your mind. '''[[#page 48\|page 48]]'''

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Ascendron: /* Synopsis */

2014-09-09T19:10:21Z

Synopsis

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			[[File:Jazz uncle jack peril from the stars 2.jpg\|thumb\|150px\|right]]
	:::::;Page 26		:::::;Page 26
	:::::''(From [[#page 21\|page 21]] or [[#page 22\|page 22]] or [[#page 25\|page 25]])''		:::::''(From [[#page 21\|page 21]] or [[#page 22\|page 22]] or [[#page 25\|page 25]])''
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			[[File:Jazz aunt sue peril from the stars.jpg\|thumb\|right\|150px]]
	:::::::;Page 35		:::::::;Page 35
	:::::::''(From [[#page 33\|page 33]])''		:::::::''(From [[#page 33\|page 33]])''
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			[[File:Jazz uncle jack peril from the stars 1.jpg\|thumb\|right\|200px]]
	:::::::;Page 12		:::::::;Page 12
	:::::::''(From [[#page 11\|page 11]])''		:::::::''(From [[#page 11\|page 11]])''
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			[[File:Bombshell starscream uncle jack aunt sue peril from the stars.jpg\|150px\|right\|thumb]]
	::::;Page 48		::::;Page 48
	::::''(From [[#page 52\|page 52]])''		::::''(From [[#page 52\|page 52]])''

Ascendron at 18:46, 26 August 2014

2014-08-26T18:46:20Z

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Steve-o: steve-o's website has moved

2013-09-22T15:54:48Z

steve-o's website has moved

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	==External links==		==External links==
	*[http://www.~~physics~~.~~ohio-state.edu/~sstoneb~~/tf/books/#corgi-adv Peril from the Stars] at Steve-o Stonebraker's site.		*[http://www.camphortree.net/tf/books/#corgi-adv Peril from the Stars] at Steve-o Stonebraker's site.

	[[Category:Generation 1 multipath adventures]]		[[Category:Generation 1 multipath adventures]]

Emvee: another error

2012-07-19T14:30:59Z

another error

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	===Endings===		===Endings===
	{{note\|As a multipath adventure, there are a number of ways in which this story can end for you:}}		{{note\|As a [[multipath adventure]], there are a number of ways in which this story can end for you:}}
	*You persuade Jazz (stuck in car mode) to try to outrun Bombshell (in aerial insect mode). He can't, and Bombshell destroys you with an explosive shell.		*You persuade Jazz (stuck in car mode) to try to outrun Bombshell (in aerial insect mode). He can't, and Bombshell destroys you with an explosive shell.
	*You take the homing beacon and put it in your pocket. When Jazz is searching for something you keep quiet, the weapons pod homes in on you and everyone at the observatory is blown to bits when it lands.		*You take the homing beacon and put it in your pocket. When Jazz is searching for something you keep quiet, the weapons pod homes in on you and everyone at the observatory is blown to bits when it lands.
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	*Starscream appears to be missing a hand on page 31.		*Starscream appears to be missing a hand on page 31.
	**And an arm on page 49.		**And an arm on page 49.
	*Despite them being described as such, Bombshell's wing casings are never drawn open when he is flying.		*Despite them being described as such, Bombshell's wing casings are never drawn open when he is flying.
			*If you throw the homing beacon at Starscream on page 44, you are described as being "too insignificant to matter" and so he fails to notice you. However on page 39, when you throw a cerebro-shell at Bombshell, Starscream sees you immediately and warns the Insecticon.

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	::::::''(From [[#page 63\|page 63]] or [[#page 64\|page 64]])''		::::::''(From [[#page 63\|page 63]] or [[#page 64\|page 64]])''

	::::::You and Jazz crouch close to the observatory’s entrance, and hear Starscream explaining his plan to your Uncle Jack. The Decepticon is after a weapons pod that was launched from the planet Cybertron millions of years ago, and has been orbiting the Sun since then. Thanks to the observatory’s telescope, Starscream has managed to locate the long-though lost pod. Now Starscream plans to use it to to rule over both Transformers and humans alike! Jazz turns to you and confirms that Starscream’s ramblings speak the truth. The two of you must move to stop the evil robot’s machinations. '''[[#page 66\|page 66]]'''		::::::You and Jazz crouch close to the observatory’s entrance, and hear Starscream explaining his plan to your Uncle Jack. The Decepticon is after a weapons pod that was launched from the planet Cybertron millions of years ago, and has been orbiting the Sun since then. Thanks to the observatory’s telescope, Starscream has managed to locate the long-though lost pod. Now Starscream plans to use it to rule over both Transformers and humans alike! Jazz turns to you and confirms that Starscream’s ramblings speak the truth. The two of you must move to stop the evil robot’s machinations. '''[[#page 66\|page 66]]'''

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			[[File:Jazz uncle jack peril from the stars 2.jpg\|thumb\|150px\|right]]
	:::::;Page 26		:::::;Page 26
	:::::''(From [[#page 21\|page 21]] or [[#page 22\|page 22]] or [[#page 25\|page 25]])''		:::::''(From [[#page 21\|page 21]] or [[#page 22\|page 22]] or [[#page 25\|page 25]])''
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			[[File:Jazz aunt sue peril from the stars.jpg\|thumb\|right\|150px]]
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	:::::::''(From [[#page 33\|page 33]])''		:::::::''(From [[#page 33\|page 33]])''
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			[[File:Jazz uncle jack peril from the stars 1.jpg\|thumb\|right\|200px]]
	:::::::;Page 12		:::::::;Page 12
	:::::::''(From [[#page 11\|page 11]])''		:::::::''(From [[#page 11\|page 11]])''
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			[[File:Bombshell starscream uncle jack aunt sue peril from the stars.jpg\|150px\|right\|thumb]]
	::::;Page 48		::::;Page 48
	::::''(From [[#page 52\|page 52]])''		::::''(From [[#page 52\|page 52]])''