Talk:Crash Combiner - Revision history

Cylasbreakdown: /* I tried to fix the article */

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I tried to fix the article

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	I don't know how to improve my "voice" more than I already have, so I tweaked that a bit, and added the toys section. I removed the tag, if you put it back up, fix the article. [[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 16:21, 22 June 2018 (EDT)		I don't know how to improve my "voice" more than I already have, so I tweaked that a bit, and added the toys section. I removed the tag, if you put it back up, fix the article. [[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 16:21, 22 June 2018 (EDT)

			AND IT LOOKS LIKE I DID FIX IT! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:00, 22 June 2018 (EDT)

S.H.I.E.L.D. Agent 47: S.H.I.E.L.D. Agent 47 moved page Talk:Crash combiner to Talk:Crash Combiner

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S.H.I.E.L.D. Agent 47 moved page Talk:Crash combiner to Talk:Crash Combiner

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Cylasbreakdown: /* I tried to fix the article */ new section

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I tried to fix the article: new section

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	:::Better? [[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:13, 14 June 2018 (EDT)		:::Better? [[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:13, 14 June 2018 (EDT)
	:::I'm removing the tag. If my work is still not adequate, feel free to put it back. No one will notice unless I remove the tag, so...[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 23:03, 16 June 2018 (EDT)		:::I'm removing the tag. If my work is still not adequate, feel free to put it back. No one will notice unless I remove the tag, so...[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 23:03, 16 June 2018 (EDT)

			== I tried to fix the article ==

			I don't know how to improve my "voice" more than I already have, so I tweaked that a bit, and added the toys section. I removed the tag, if you put it back up, fix the article. [[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 16:21, 22 June 2018 (EDT)

Cylasbreakdown at 03:03, 17 June 2018

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	:::Okay, sorry. This is the first whole article I've written. No one has mentioned any problems with my style in other articles I've contributed to. I didn't realize. -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:32, 9 May 2018 (EDT)		:::Okay, sorry. This is the first whole article I've written. No one has mentioned any problems with my style in other articles I've contributed to. I didn't realize. -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:32, 9 May 2018 (EDT)
	:::Better? [[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:13, 14 June 2018 (EDT)		:::Better? [[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:13, 14 June 2018 (EDT)
			:::I'm removing the tag. If my work is still not adequate, feel free to put it back. No one will notice unless I remove the tag, so...[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 23:03, 16 June 2018 (EDT)

Cylasbreakdown at 22:13, 14 June 2018

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	::It means you wrote it from the perspective of the real world of the reader/viewer/consumer, instead of writing it from the perspective of the fictional world of the characters. --[[User:Sabrblade\|Sabrblade]] ([[User talk:Sabrblade\|talk]]) 23:13, 7 May 2018 (EDT)		::It means you wrote it from the perspective of the real world of the reader/viewer/consumer, instead of writing it from the perspective of the fictional world of the characters. --[[User:Sabrblade\|Sabrblade]] ([[User talk:Sabrblade\|talk]]) 23:13, 7 May 2018 (EDT)
	:::Okay, sorry. This is the first whole article I've written. No one has mentioned any problems with my style in other articles I've contributed to. I didn't realize. -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:32, 9 May 2018 (EDT)		:::Okay, sorry. This is the first whole article I've written. No one has mentioned any problems with my style in other articles I've contributed to. I didn't realize. -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:32, 9 May 2018 (EDT)
			:::Better? [[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:13, 14 June 2018 (EDT)

Cylasbreakdown at 22:32, 9 May 2018

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	:What does "written out of universe" mean? -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 22:00, 7 May 2018 (EDT)		:What does "written out of universe" mean? -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 22:00, 7 May 2018 (EDT)
	::It means you wrote it from the perspective of the real world of the reader/viewer/consumer, instead of writing it from the perspective of the fictional world of the characters. --[[User:Sabrblade\|Sabrblade]] ([[User talk:Sabrblade\|talk]]) 23:13, 7 May 2018 (EDT)		::It means you wrote it from the perspective of the real world of the reader/viewer/consumer, instead of writing it from the perspective of the fictional world of the characters. --[[User:Sabrblade\|Sabrblade]] ([[User talk:Sabrblade\|talk]]) 23:13, 7 May 2018 (EDT)
			:::Okay, sorry. This is the first whole article I've written. No one has mentioned any problems with my style in other articles I've contributed to. I didn't realize. -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:32, 9 May 2018 (EDT)

Sabrblade at 03:13, 8 May 2018

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	:Should probably be made into a page about the toy type with a mention that the fiction just treated them as normal combiners.--[[User:Khajidha\|Khajidha]] ([[User talk:Khajidha\|talk]]) 17:15, 6 May 2018 (EDT)		:Should probably be made into a page about the toy type with a mention that the fiction just treated them as normal combiners.--[[User:Khajidha\|Khajidha]] ([[User talk:Khajidha\|talk]]) 17:15, 6 May 2018 (EDT)
	:What does "written out of universe" mean? -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 22:00, 7 May 2018 (EDT)		:What does "written out of universe" mean? -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 22:00, 7 May 2018 (EDT)
			::It means you wrote it from the perspective of the real world of the reader/viewer/consumer, instead of writing it from the perspective of the fictional world of the characters. --[[User:Sabrblade\|Sabrblade]] ([[User talk:Sabrblade\|talk]]) 23:13, 7 May 2018 (EDT)

Cylasbreakdown at 02:00, 8 May 2018

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	Is this really a necessary article? Fiction didn't treat them as anything truly distinct from the larger combiners, they were just made up of fewer robots. Also, it's written out-of-universe. [[User:Jalaguy\|Jalaguy]] ([[User talk:Jalaguy\|talk]]) 16:52, 6 May 2018 (EDT)		Is this really a necessary article? Fiction didn't treat them as anything truly distinct from the larger combiners, they were just made up of fewer robots. Also, it's written out-of-universe. [[User:Jalaguy\|Jalaguy]] ([[User talk:Jalaguy\|talk]]) 16:52, 6 May 2018 (EDT)
	:Should probably be made into a page about the toy type with a mention that the fiction just treated them as normal combiners.--[[User:Khajidha\|Khajidha]] ([[User talk:Khajidha\|talk]]) 17:15, 6 May 2018 (EDT)		:Should probably be made into a page about the toy type with a mention that the fiction just treated them as normal combiners.--[[User:Khajidha\|Khajidha]] ([[User talk:Khajidha\|talk]]) 17:15, 6 May 2018 (EDT)
			:What does "written out of universe" mean? -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 22:00, 7 May 2018 (EDT)

Khajidha at 21:15, 6 May 2018

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	Is this really a necessary article? Fiction didn't treat them as anything truly distinct from the larger combiners, they were just made up of fewer robots. Also, it's written out-of-universe. [[User:Jalaguy\|Jalaguy]] ([[User talk:Jalaguy\|talk]]) 16:52, 6 May 2018 (EDT)		Is this really a necessary article? Fiction didn't treat them as anything truly distinct from the larger combiners, they were just made up of fewer robots. Also, it's written out-of-universe. [[User:Jalaguy\|Jalaguy]] ([[User talk:Jalaguy\|talk]]) 16:52, 6 May 2018 (EDT)
			:Should probably be made into a page about the toy type with a mention that the fiction just treated them as normal combiners.--[[User:Khajidha\|Khajidha]] ([[User talk:Khajidha\|talk]]) 17:15, 6 May 2018 (EDT)

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Is this really a necessary article? Fiction didn't treat them as anything truly distinct from the larger combiners, they were just made up of fewer robots. Also, it's written out-of-universe. [[User:Jalaguy|Jalaguy]] ([[User talk:Jalaguy|talk]]) 16:52, 6 May 2018 (EDT)

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	:::Okay, sorry. This is the first whole article I've written. No one has mentioned any problems with my style in other articles I've contributed to. I didn't realize. -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:32, 9 May 2018 (EDT)		:::Okay, sorry. This is the first whole article I've written. No one has mentioned any problems with my style in other articles I've contributed to. I didn't realize. -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:32, 9 May 2018 (EDT)
	:::Better? [[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:13, 14 June 2018 (EDT)		:::Better? [[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:13, 14 June 2018 (EDT)
			:::I'm removing the tag. If my work is still not adequate, feel free to put it back. No one will notice unless I remove the tag, so...[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 23:03, 16 June 2018 (EDT)

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	::It means you wrote it from the perspective of the real world of the reader/viewer/consumer, instead of writing it from the perspective of the fictional world of the characters. --[[User:Sabrblade\|Sabrblade]] ([[User talk:Sabrblade\|talk]]) 23:13, 7 May 2018 (EDT)		::It means you wrote it from the perspective of the real world of the reader/viewer/consumer, instead of writing it from the perspective of the fictional world of the characters. --[[User:Sabrblade\|Sabrblade]] ([[User talk:Sabrblade\|talk]]) 23:13, 7 May 2018 (EDT)
	:::Okay, sorry. This is the first whole article I've written. No one has mentioned any problems with my style in other articles I've contributed to. I didn't realize. -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:32, 9 May 2018 (EDT)		:::Okay, sorry. This is the first whole article I've written. No one has mentioned any problems with my style in other articles I've contributed to. I didn't realize. -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:32, 9 May 2018 (EDT)
			:::Better? [[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:13, 14 June 2018 (EDT)

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	:What does "written out of universe" mean? -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 22:00, 7 May 2018 (EDT)		:What does "written out of universe" mean? -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 22:00, 7 May 2018 (EDT)
	::It means you wrote it from the perspective of the real world of the reader/viewer/consumer, instead of writing it from the perspective of the fictional world of the characters. --[[User:Sabrblade\|Sabrblade]] ([[User talk:Sabrblade\|talk]]) 23:13, 7 May 2018 (EDT)		::It means you wrote it from the perspective of the real world of the reader/viewer/consumer, instead of writing it from the perspective of the fictional world of the characters. --[[User:Sabrblade\|Sabrblade]] ([[User talk:Sabrblade\|talk]]) 23:13, 7 May 2018 (EDT)
			:::Okay, sorry. This is the first whole article I've written. No one has mentioned any problems with my style in other articles I've contributed to. I didn't realize. -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 18:32, 9 May 2018 (EDT)

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	:Should probably be made into a page about the toy type with a mention that the fiction just treated them as normal combiners.--[[User:Khajidha\|Khajidha]] ([[User talk:Khajidha\|talk]]) 17:15, 6 May 2018 (EDT)		:Should probably be made into a page about the toy type with a mention that the fiction just treated them as normal combiners.--[[User:Khajidha\|Khajidha]] ([[User talk:Khajidha\|talk]]) 17:15, 6 May 2018 (EDT)
	:What does "written out of universe" mean? -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 22:00, 7 May 2018 (EDT)		:What does "written out of universe" mean? -[[User:Cylasbreakdown\|Cylasbreakdown]] ([[User talk:Cylasbreakdown\|talk]]) 22:00, 7 May 2018 (EDT)
			::It means you wrote it from the perspective of the real world of the reader/viewer/consumer, instead of writing it from the perspective of the fictional world of the characters. --[[User:Sabrblade\|Sabrblade]] ([[User talk:Sabrblade\|talk]]) 23:13, 7 May 2018 (EDT)