User:AzimuthAcolyte/Sandbox/Source:Henkei Wheelie Comic - Revision history

AzimuthAcolyte: /* Panel 5 */

2022-07-27T00:53:10Z

Panel 5

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	''The Minibots notice the beast's PREDACON INSIGNIA''		''The Minibots notice the beast's PREDACON INSIGNIA''

	'''~~NARRATION-ISH~~:''' やっぱりデストロンだったのかっ？<ref name = "outofpanel"/>		'''BEACHCOMBER KINDA:''' やっぱりデストロンだったのかっ？<ref name = "outofpanel"/>

	'''BEACHCOMBER:''' あのマークはデストロン？		'''BEACHCOMBER:''' あのマークはデストロン？

AzimuthAcolyte: /* Panel 4 */

2022-07-27T00:52:24Z

Panel 4

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	'''MINIBOTS:''' はたしてサイバトロンかそれとも･･･		'''MINIBOTS:''' はたしてサイバトロンかそれとも･･･

	'''~~NARRATION-ISH~~:''' いかにも凶悪そうな恐竜を発見したけど･・？！<ref name = "outofpanel"/>		'''MINIBOTS KINDA:''' いかにも凶悪そうな恐竜を発見したけど･・？！<ref name = "outofpanel"/>

	==Page 3==		==Page 3==

AzimuthAcolyte: /* Panel 2 */

2022-07-27T00:51:58Z

Panel 2

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	―ん？まだこの近くに反応があるな		―ん？まだこの近くに反応があるな

	'''~~NARRATION-ISH~~:''' Leave the exploration mission to us!!!<ref name = "outofpanel">Okay so these lines are outside of the panels entirely. I think they might be communicating the vibe of the scene and not be literal dialogue???</ref>		'''MINIBOTS KINDA:''' Leave the exploration mission to us!!!<ref name = "outofpanel">Okay so these lines are outside of the panels entirely. I think they might be communicating the vibe of the scene and not be literal dialogue???</ref>

	探査任務はオレ達にまかせろっ!!!		探査任務はオレ達にまかせろっ!!!

AzimuthAcolyte: /* Page 4 */

2022-07-27T00:48:50Z

Page 4

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	''Dinobot makes his big entrance!''		''Dinobot makes his big entrance!''

	'''DINOBOT PRESUMABLY:'''		'''DINOBOT PRESUMABLY:''' オレは体がなまってんだ！あばれさせてもらうぜ！
	===Panel 2===		===Panel 2===
	''The Minibots let fly a combined assault!''		''The Minibots let fly a combined assault!''

	'''MINIBOTS:'''		'''MINIBOTS:''' な･･･なんてねおきの悪さだ!!!

	'''MINIBOTS:'''		'''MINIBOTS:''' ありえない!!!

	'''~~NARRATION-ISH~~:'''<ref name = "outofpanel"/>		'''DINOBOT KINDA:''' ダイノ・サーベルで斬り刻んでやるっ!!<ref name = "outofpanel"/>

	==Page 5==		==Page 5==

AzimuthAcolyte: /* Page 3 */

2022-07-26T22:34:24Z

Page 3

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	''The rock formation explodes!''		''The rock formation explodes!''

	'''MINIBOTS:'''		'''MINIBOTS:''' あばれてぇ

	'''MINIBOTS:'''		'''MINIBOTS:''' [Machine transcription failed]

	===Panel 4===		===Panel 4===
	''The dino is free!''		''The dino is free!''

	'''~~A MINIBOT~~:'''		'''DINOBOT:''' だぁここはいつの時代だ？
	===Panel 5===		===Panel 5===
	''The Minibots notice the beast's PREDACON INSIGNIA''		''The Minibots notice the beast's PREDACON INSIGNIA''

	'''NARRATION-ISH:'''<ref name = "outofpanel"/>		'''NARRATION-ISH:''' やっぱりデストロンだったのかっ？<ref name = "outofpanel"/>

	'''BEACHCOMBER:'''		'''BEACHCOMBER:''' あのマークはデストロン？

	===Panel 6-7===		===Panel 6-7===
	''The dinosaur transforms.''		''The dinosaur transforms.''

	'''DINOBOT:'''		'''DINOBOT:''' まあいいや、へぇんしいいん！

	==Page 4==		==Page 4==

AzimuthAcolyte: /* Panel 5 */

2022-07-26T22:32:48Z

Panel 5

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	'''A MINIBOT:'''		'''A MINIBOT:'''
	===Panel 5===		===Panel 5===
	''The ~~Minobots~~ notice the beast's PREDACON INSIGNIA''		''The Minibots notice the beast's PREDACON INSIGNIA''

	'''NARRATION-ISH:'''<ref name = "outofpanel"/>		'''NARRATION-ISH:'''<ref name = "outofpanel"/>

	'''BEACHCOMBER:'''		'''BEACHCOMBER:'''

	===Panel 6-7===		===Panel 6-7===
	''The dinosaur transforms.''		''The dinosaur transforms.''

AzimuthAcolyte: /* Panel 3-4 */

2022-07-26T17:41:42Z

Panel 3-4

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	''The Minibots transform.''		''The Minibots transform.''

	'''ALL:''' Machine transcription failed but 90% certain this was just "TRANSFORM!!!"		'''ALL:''' [Machine transcription failed but 90% certain this was just "TRANSFORM!!!"]

	===Panel 5===		===Panel 5===

AzimuthAcolyte: /* Panel 1 */

2022-07-26T17:41:22Z

Panel 1

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	''The dino stirs.''		''The dino stirs.''

	'''A MINOBOT PROBABLY:'''		'''A MINOBOT PROBABLY:''' [Machine transcription failed]

	===Panel 2===		===Panel 2===
	''WHEELIE and BRAWN are confused.''		''WHEELIE and BRAWN are confused.''

AzimuthAcolyte: /* Page 2 */

2022-07-26T17:20:20Z

Page 2

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	''The Minibots find a PETRIFIED DINOSAUR.''		''The Minibots find a PETRIFIED DINOSAUR.''

	'''MINIBOTS:'''		'''MINIBOTS:''' これもまたしっかりした形で残っていたものだな･･･

	'''MINIBOTS:'''		'''MINIBOTS:''' はたしてサイバトロンかそれとも･･･

	'''NARRATION-ISH:'''<ref name = "outofpanel"/>		'''NARRATION-ISH:''' いかにも凶悪そうな恐竜を発見したけど･・？！<ref name = "outofpanel"/>

	==Page 3==		==Page 3==

AzimuthAcolyte at 17:19, 26 July 2022

2022-07-26T17:19:38Z

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	―ん？まだこの近くに反応があるな		―ん？まだこの近くに反応があるな

	'''~~MINIBOTS, METAPHORICALLY~~:''' Leave the exploration mission to us!!!<ref name = "outofpanel">Okay so these lines are outside of the panels entirely. I think they might be communicating the vibe of the scene and not be literal dialogue???</ref>		'''NARRATION-ISH:''' Leave the exploration mission to us!!!<ref name = "outofpanel">Okay so these lines are outside of the panels entirely. I think they might be communicating the vibe of the scene and not be literal dialogue???</ref>

	探査任務はオレ達にまかせろっ!!!		探査任務はオレ達にまかせろっ!!!
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	'''MINIBOTS:'''		'''MINIBOTS:'''

			'''NARRATION-ISH:'''<ref name = "outofpanel"/>

	==Page 3==		==Page 3==
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	''The Minobots notice the beast's PREDACON INSIGNIA''		''The Minobots notice the beast's PREDACON INSIGNIA''

	'''~~PROBABLY A MINIBOT~~:'''<ref name = "outofpanel"/>		'''NARRATION-ISH:'''<ref name = "outofpanel"/>

	'''BEACHCOMBER:'''		'''BEACHCOMBER:'''
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	'''MINIBOTS:'''		'''MINIBOTS:'''

	'''~~ALSO MINIBOTS PRESUMABLY~~:'''<ref name = "outofpanel"/>		'''NARRATION-ISH:'''<ref name = "outofpanel"/>

	==Page 5==		==Page 5==
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	''Hot Shot and Jolt decouple.''		''Hot Shot and Jolt decouple.''

	'''~~DINOBOT MAYBE~~:'''<ref name = "outofpanel"/>		'''NARRATION-ISH:'''<ref name = "outofpanel"/>
	===Panel 4-5===		===Panel 4-5===
	'''HOT SHOT:''' Probably "TRANSFORM!" again		'''HOT SHOT:''' Probably "TRANSFORM!" again
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	''Live Dinobot reaction''		''Live Dinobot reaction''

	'''~~DINOBOT PRESUMABLY~~''':<ref name = "outofpanel"/>		'''NARRATION-ISH''':<ref name = "outofpanel"/>

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	''The Minibots appear to have brought Hot Shot and Dinobot back to the AUTOBOT BASE, where Dinobot has hit it off with Grimlock.''		''The Minibots appear to have brought Hot Shot and Dinobot back to the AUTOBOT BASE, where Dinobot has hit it off with Grimlock.''

	'''~~THESE OUT OF PANEL LINES ARE KILLING ME~~:'''<ref name = "outofpanel"/>		'''NARRATION-ISH:'''<ref name = "outofpanel"/>

	'''NARRATION:'''		'''NARRATION:'''