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<p><span class="autocomment">Discussion</span></p> <table style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122;" data-mw="interface"> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <col class="diff-marker" /> <col class="diff-content" /> <tr class="diff-title" lang="en"> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td> <td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 23:07, 11 April 2010</td> </tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l1">Line 1:</td> <td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 1:</td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>== Discussion ==</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>== Discussion ==</div></td></tr> <tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>This was born from [[User:Repowers|Repowers]] suggestion to get synopses for the [[multipath adventure]] books written up. The format is based on Rob&#039;s suggestions in the discussion at [[Talk:Dinobots Strike Back]]. Having written this up, I&#039;d like to get some feedback on both the format of the synopsis as well as my writing. I fear that, as is, the synopsis is too detailed and long-winded. That same problem may hurt the format too, making it too difficult to discern. Thoughts? --[[User:Tigerpaw28|Tigerpaw28]] 23:40, 10 April 2010 (EDT)</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>This was born from [[User:Repowers|Repowers]] suggestion to get synopses for the [[multipath adventure]] books written up. The format is based on Rob&#039;s suggestions in the discussion at [[Talk:Dinobots Strike Back]]. Having written this up, I&#039;d like to get some feedback on both the format of the synopsis as well as my writing. I fear that, as is, the synopsis is too detailed and long-winded. That same problem may hurt the format too, making it too difficult to discern. Thoughts? --[[User:Tigerpaw28|Tigerpaw28]] 23:40, 10 April 2010 (EDT)</div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">:I kinda think that having it formatted in this way makes it difficult to get an overall feel for the story.  It ''might'' improve things if it was less detailed, but it's hard to say.</ins></div></td></tr> <tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-side-deleted"></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">:One alternative method of presentation I've been thinking of trying is to write up one specific path through the book, as if it was one continuous story, then have a line along the lines of "Or maybe it happened this way:" and then do the same thing again, but taking a wildly different path through the book.  The drawback to doing this would be that you lose the detail of all of the various endings.  You could have a sub-branches section to detail them, perhaps. --[[User:Abates|abates]] 19:07, 11 April 2010 (EDT)</ins></div></td></tr> </table>

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<p>New page: == Discussion == This was born from <a href="/index.php/User:Repowers" title="User:Repowers">Repowers</a> suggestion to get synopses for the <a href="/index.php/Multipath_adventure" title="Multipath adventure">multipath adventure</a> books written up. The format is based on Rob&#039;s suggestions in the ...</p> <p><b>New page</b></p><div>== Discussion ==<br /> This was born from [[User:Repowers|Repowers]] suggestion to get synopses for the [[multipath adventure]] books written up. The format is based on Rob&#039;s suggestions in the discussion at [[Talk:Dinobots Strike Back]]. Having written this up, I&#039;d like to get some feedback on both the format of the synopsis as well as my writing. I fear that, as is, the synopsis is too detailed and long-winded. That same problem may hurt the format too, making it too difficult to discern. Thoughts? --[[User:Tigerpaw28|Tigerpaw28]] 23:40, 10 April 2010 (EDT)</div>

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