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:...Why do you ask him? Anyway, no one knows.(And please sighn your post.)--[[User:Sunjumper|Sunjumper]] 15:18, 31 August 2009 (EDT) | :...Why do you ask him? Anyway, no one knows.(And please sighn your post.)--[[User:Sunjumper|Sunjumper]] 15:18, 31 August 2009 (EDT) | ||
:: Sorry. [[User:ZeldaTheSwordsman|ZeldaTheSwordsman]] 15:33, 31 August 2009 (EDT) | :: Sorry. [[User:ZeldaTheSwordsman|ZeldaTheSwordsman]] 15:33, 31 August 2009 (EDT) | ||
== Shorter Summaries, Please == | |||
Your work on the Thundercracker (Armada) article is definitely appreciated. However, your summary style needs some polishing. There's no need for a scene-by-scene account of each episode's events, and you should almost never have to include direct dialog quotes in the summary itself. Compare your initial version to my revision or to some of the longer-standing synopses on the wiki and see if you can get a better feel for the accepted style. Thanks! --[[User:Apcog|Apcog]] 19:23, 31 August 2009 (EDT) | |||
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Where did that Pornography 13 jerk come from?
- ...Why do you ask him? Anyway, no one knows.(And please sighn your post.)--Sunjumper 15:18, 31 August 2009 (EDT)
- Sorry. ZeldaTheSwordsman 15:33, 31 August 2009 (EDT)
Shorter Summaries, Please
Your work on the Thundercracker (Armada) article is definitely appreciated. However, your summary style needs some polishing. There's no need for a scene-by-scene account of each episode's events, and you should almost never have to include direct dialog quotes in the summary itself. Compare your initial version to my revision or to some of the longer-standing synopses on the wiki and see if you can get a better feel for the accepted style. Thanks! --Apcog 19:23, 31 August 2009 (EDT)
