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Thank you for adding to Bulkhead's Fiction section. However, character page Fiction sections are in PAST tense. Episode/issue summaries are in present tense. Even with that aside, your grammar needs work. Take a look at [http://tfwiki.net/w2/index.php?title=Bulkhead_%28Animated%29&diff=463880&oldid=447033 all the changes] made to the ''Animated'' cartoon section after since you contributed. Please try to use those changes as a guide to improving your writing style.--[[User:Apcog|Apcog]] 18:28, 9 June 2010 (EDT) | Thank you for adding to Bulkhead's Fiction section. However, character page Fiction sections are in PAST tense. Episode/issue summaries are in present tense. Even with that aside, your grammar needs work. Take a look at [http://tfwiki.net/w2/index.php?title=Bulkhead_%28Animated%29&diff=463880&oldid=447033 all the changes] made to the ''Animated'' cartoon section after since you contributed. Please try to use those changes as a guide to improving your writing style.--[[User:Apcog|Apcog]] 18:28, 9 June 2010 (EDT) | ||
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And also, don't remove information from pages, like Jetstorm's fiction or either Twin's Japanese toy release. --Detour 21:46, 9 April 2010 (EDT)
Thank you for adding to Bulkhead's Fiction section. However, character page Fiction sections are in PAST tense. Episode/issue summaries are in present tense. Even with that aside, your grammar needs work. Take a look at all the changes made to the Animated cartoon section after since you contributed. Please try to use those changes as a guide to improving your writing style.--Apcog 18:28, 9 June 2010 (EDT)



