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Hi, thanks for doing the comic issue articles lately. I would advise you avoid repetition in sentences such as "Optimus Prime asks how Omega came here, to which he replied that he got their message, to which Hot Rod realizes that his message finally did get through." See what I mean? ;) --FFN 04:59, 17 April 2009 (EDT)