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About your Arcee edits
[edit]"She later eventully decided it will be good to switch back to her original, older, single-form body!" Let's see how many problems we can find: 1. Later includes the concept of eventually, so your addition is redundant 2. You spelled eventually wrong 3. Will is the wrong verb tense 4. The change from fun to good has no justification 5. Older includes original, so your addition is redundant
And you wonder why it was reverted. Khajidha 11:47, 1 April 2010 (EDT)
- Your second try - "She's later decided it'd be good to switch back to her original, single-form body!" Again, let's count the problems.
1. Is (implied in the contraction She's) is the wrong verb tense 2. The same good/fun comment 3. You removed the redundancy of original older (which was good), but the change wasn't really necessary. And we don't actually know tha this was her original form (in a fictional sense). Khajidha 11:51, 1 April 2010 (EDT)
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