User talk:MetroPlex71
However, writing image captions on TFWiki is considered a perk of sorts for those who spend time making significant factual edits. You especially shouldn't be changing existing captions. Jalaguy (talk) 12:08, 2 July 2014 (EDT)
- Additionally, please use capital letters and punctuation when editing. Thanks. Jalaguy (talk) 12:18, 2 July 2014 (EDT)
Please learn how to use capital letters correctly. Jalaguy (talk) 18:54, 2 July 2014 (EDT)
Hi, your additions to the Age of Extinction page have problems with spelling, punctuation and grammar, which is why they keep being removed. Information needs to be presented in a clear manner or the readers will not be able to understand what happened in the movie. As an example, you added the sentence "The Autobots scored a huge victory when Megatron was slained by Optimus prime." - here Prime should start with a capital P and "slained" should be "slew", as slain is not a verb. The sentence following that one "The problem is the battle caused the lives of thousands of people." means the exact opposite of what it should mean. --abates (talk) 20:18, 2 July 2014 (EDT)
