Talk:Crash Combiner

Is this really a necessary article? Fiction didn't treat them as anything truly distinct from the larger combiners, they were just made up of fewer robots. Also, it's written out-of-universe. Jalaguy (talk) 16:52, 6 May 2018 (EDT)

Should probably be made into a page about the toy type with a mention that the fiction just treated them as normal combiners.--Khajidha (talk) 17:15, 6 May 2018 (EDT)

What does "written out of universe" mean? -Cylasbreakdown (talk) 22:00, 7 May 2018 (EDT)

It means you wrote it from the perspective of the real world of the reader/viewer/consumer, instead of writing it from the perspective of the fictional world of the characters. --Sabrblade (talk) 23:13, 7 May 2018 (EDT)

Okay, sorry. This is the first whole article I've written. No one has mentioned any problems with my style in other articles I've contributed to. I didn't realize. -Cylasbreakdown (talk) 18:32, 9 May 2018 (EDT)

Better? Cylasbreakdown (talk) 18:13, 14 June 2018 (EDT)

I'm removing the tag. If my work is still not adequate, feel free to put it back. No one will notice unless I remove the tag, so...Cylasbreakdown (talk) 23:03, 16 June 2018 (EDT)

I tried to fix the article

I don't know how to improve my "voice" more than I already have, so I tweaked that a bit, and added the toys section. I removed the tag, if you put it back up, fix the article. Cylasbreakdown (talk) 16:21, 22 June 2018 (EDT)

AND IT LOOKS LIKE I DID FIX IT! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Cylasbreakdown (talk) 18:00, 22 June 2018 (EDT)