Talk:Mayhem Suppression Squad

Awkward Sentence

"Dirge is a yellow version of the Games of Deception Dirge (homaging Beast Wars II Thrust) wearing the Descent into Evil Dirge in Descent into Evil Chromia colors as a Pretender Shell."

I'm not sure this sentence came out the way intended. Is the following correct?

"Dirge is based on Games of Deception Dirge, wearing a Pretender Shell based on Descent into Evil Dirge. He is colored yellow as an homage to Beast Wars II Thrust, while his Shell's color scheme is inspired by Descent into Evil Chromia."
JW 15:07, 4 April 2008 (UTC)