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Forgive me if I'm wrong, but to me, his accent sounds distinctly more Cockney than Liverpudlian. [[User:Kit|Kit]] 13:46, 20 August 2009 (EDT) | Forgive me if I'm wrong, but to me, his accent sounds distinctly more Cockney than Liverpudlian. [[User:Kit|Kit]] 13:46, 20 August 2009 (EDT) | ||
== Incomplete sentence needs fix == | |||
In the Cybertron Defense Red Alert write-up: | |||
''He now transforms into a cross between a Russian R-400 Oka mobile ballistic missile launcher.'' | |||
A cross between that and a ''what'' now? I'd fix it myself, but I'm not sure how. I'll let this notice sit for a week or two, and if no one fixes it, I'll just change it to say it looks similar to the Russian missle launcher. | |||
--[[User:GrantB|GrantB]] 10:27, 27 August 2009 (EDT) | |||
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Accent
Forgive me if I'm wrong, but to me, his accent sounds distinctly more Cockney than Liverpudlian. Kit 13:46, 20 August 2009 (EDT)
Incomplete sentence needs fix
In the Cybertron Defense Red Alert write-up:
He now transforms into a cross between a Russian R-400 Oka mobile ballistic missile launcher.
A cross between that and a what now? I'd fix it myself, but I'm not sure how. I'll let this notice sit for a week or two, and if no one fixes it, I'll just change it to say it looks similar to the Russian missle launcher.
--GrantB 10:27, 27 August 2009 (EDT)
