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Should we mention in the "Notes" that this is the first incarnation of Bulkead to be a Wrecker?-----[[User:XxxOUTBURSTxxx|XxxOUTBURSTxxx]] 19:22, 26 March 2012 (EDT)
Should we mention in the "Notes" that this is the first incarnation of Bulkead to be a Wrecker?-----[[User:XxxOUTBURSTxxx|XxxOUTBURSTxxx]] 19:22, 26 March 2012 (EDT)
: Again, we're not super-interested in "firsts."  --[[User:ItsWalky|ItsWalky]] 21:12, 26 March 2012 (EDT)
: Again, we're not super-interested in "firsts."  --[[User:ItsWalky|ItsWalky]] 21:12, 26 March 2012 (EDT)
== Grammar, Spelling and Rewording ==
"Back on Cybertron, before he became a warrior, Bulkhead was a laborer, working in construction."
I'm no editor, but considering that the sentence only contained fifteen words I doubt it needed three commas. Here is a possible rewording:
"Before he became a warrior Bulkhead worked as a construction laborer on Cybertron."
I also spotted another sentence that could use some slight tweaking:
"However Bulkhead left the Wreckers early on in the war to join Team Prime however."
Nix that last however.
I could fill this page with all the changes I would like to make, but I'm not very good at differentiating between a change that improves the article and a change that only suits my personal preference.
[[User:TheCritic|TheCritic]] 12:55, 6 April 2012 (EDT)

Revision as of 16:55, 6 April 2012

When his pic is on the main page, it leads to Ironhide (Prime)! —The preceding unsigned comment was added by TOM (talk • contribs) 22:39, November 25, 2010 (EDT).

Thanks! Fixed. - Starfield 21:50, 25 November 2010 (EST)
Maybe in the Japanese version of Prime, Bulkhead will be renamed Ironhide for consistency with the other franchises. --NCZ 21:54, 25 November 2010 (EST)

Wreckers

Should we mention in the "Notes" that this is the first incarnation of Bulkead to be a Wrecker?-----XxxOUTBURSTxxx 19:22, 26 March 2012 (EDT)

Again, we're not super-interested in "firsts." --ItsWalky 21:12, 26 March 2012 (EDT)

Grammar, Spelling and Rewording

"Back on Cybertron, before he became a warrior, Bulkhead was a laborer, working in construction."

I'm no editor, but considering that the sentence only contained fifteen words I doubt it needed three commas. Here is a possible rewording:

"Before he became a warrior Bulkhead worked as a construction laborer on Cybertron."

I also spotted another sentence that could use some slight tweaking:

"However Bulkhead left the Wreckers early on in the war to join Team Prime however."

Nix that last however.

I could fill this page with all the changes I would like to make, but I'm not very good at differentiating between a change that improves the article and a change that only suits my personal preference.

TheCritic 12:55, 6 April 2012 (EDT)