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:The whole section needs trimming back too, really. Many of our Prime articles have ended up overlong. --[[User:Abates|abates]] 18:51, 6 April 2012 (EDT)
:The whole section needs trimming back too, really. Many of our Prime articles have ended up overlong. --[[User:Abates|abates]] 18:51, 6 April 2012 (EDT)
::And done. --[[User:Abates|abates]] 19:59, 6 April 2012 (EDT)
::And done. --[[User:Abates|abates]] 19:59, 6 April 2012 (EDT)
== Alt Mode ==
Does Bulkhead's vehicle mode resemble a Chevy Avalanche to anyone else? Is it a strong enough resemblance to add it to his description?

Revision as of 05:47, 24 May 2012

When his pic is on the main page, it leads to Ironhide (Prime)! —The preceding unsigned comment was added by TOM (talkcontribs) 22:39, November 25, 2010 (EDT).

Thanks! Fixed. - Starfield 21:50, 25 November 2010 (EST)
Maybe in the Japanese version of Prime, Bulkhead will be renamed Ironhide for consistency with the other franchises. --NCZ 21:54, 25 November 2010 (EST)

Wreckers

Should we mention in the "Notes" that this is the first incarnation of Bulkead to be a Wrecker?-----XxxOUTBURSTxxx 19:22, 26 March 2012 (EDT)

Again, we're not super-interested in "firsts." --ItsWalky 21:12, 26 March 2012 (EDT)

Grammar, Spelling and Rewording

"Back on Cybertron, before he became a warrior, Bulkhead was a laborer, working in construction."


I'm no editor, but considering that the sentence only contained fifteen words I doubt it needed three commas. Here is a possible rewording:

"Before he became a warrior Bulkhead worked as a construction laborer on Cybertron."


I also spotted another sentence that could use some slight tweaking:

"However Bulkhead left the Wreckers early on in the war to join Team Prime however."


Nix that last however.


I could fill this page with all the changes I would like to make, but I'm not very good at differentiating between a change that improves the article and a change that only suits my personal preference.

--TheCritic 12:55, 6 April 2012 (EDT)

The whole section needs trimming back too, really. Many of our Prime articles have ended up overlong. --abates 18:51, 6 April 2012 (EDT)
And done. --abates 19:59, 6 April 2012 (EDT)

Alt Mode

Does Bulkhead's vehicle mode resemble a Chevy Avalanche to anyone else? Is it a strong enough resemblance to add it to his description?