User talk:Cydra
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Nothing to say here; just takin' up space so our troll buddy can't. -- Repowers 13:29, 28 August 2009 (EDT)
I put this here mainly because the admirable additions you made to Animated Ratchet and Bulkhead's articles are unfortunately riddled with typos and stylistic problems. Character-page fiction sections are always written in past tense, and you tend to switch between past and present tense at random. Fiction summaries should also avoid too much blow-by-blow description—that's why they're summaries—and too much verbatim quoting of dialog. Please look over the changes I made to your Ratchet edits and see if you can polish your Bulkhead edits in the same way.--Apcog 17:11, 28 August 2009 (EDT)


