User talk:Cydra

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Nothing to say here; just takin' up space so our troll buddy can't. -- Repowers 13:29, 28 August 2009 (EDT)

You and Megatron have one thing in common.

Please proofread your contributions more thoroughly. By default, we require correct English in our articles, including correct spelling, punctuation, and use of capital letters. If your edits don't follow these rules, other editors may choose to revert them rather than spend their time cleaning up your mistakes.

I put this here mainly because the admirable additions you made to Animated Ratchet and Bulkhead's articles are unfortunately riddled with typos and stylistic problems. Character-page fiction sections are always written in past tense, and you tend to switch between past and present tense at random. Fiction summaries should also avoid too much blow-by-blow description—that's why they're summaries—and too much verbatim quoting of dialog. Please look over the changes I made to your Ratchet edits and see if you can polish your Bulkhead edits in the same way.--Apcog 17:11, 28 August 2009 (EDT)

Thanks for fixing up my edit for Animated Ratchet's page. I'm kinda new at this so I don't know how to edit a page properly on this site yet. I'll try to fix Animated Bulkhead's page as soon as I can. —Cydra 17:48, 8 August 2009 (EST)
I'm transferring your response here, as it's easier to follow conversations that are all on one page. (Another lesson for the day!)
You actually inserted your article page edits properly, but your text needed a lot of stylistic editing. I'd do the Bulkhead editing myself, but it's busier than usual for me, so I was hoping I could let my Ratchet edits stand as an example for you. Glad to see it seems to be working. Have fun!--Apcog 19:04, 28 August 2009 (EDT)
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