Talk:Things Fall Apart, Part 5: "Earthworks"

In the bottom-most panel on page 17, there is a silhouette that clearly resembles Drag Strip, but it might be possible that Don Figueroa meant for it to be Mirage, since it is willingly giving itself up, which is very uncharacteristic of any Decepticon. I put it in the "items of note" section, but left it out of the featured character section since the identity of the silhouette is debatable. Mechabreaker 19:44, 29 April 2010 (EDT)

The fact Mirage is in vehicle mode when he's next seen is shaky reasoning for assuming the guy on page 17 isn't him. He could have simply transformed to more easily fit on the Skywatch transport. - Cattleprod 20:18, 29 April 2010 (EDT)

Is it just me or are there some very, very, very long sentences in this article. For example, the paragraph where Thundercracker saves Bumblebee is one long sentence. I don't have this issue yet so I can't edit it myself without risking changing the intent. --FFN 20:33, 29 April 2010 (EDT)

Fixed the paragraph in question, along with a few others that I found. I hope it is sufficient enough to meet standard quality.Mechabreaker 21:33, 29 April 2010 (EDT)