Talk:Thunderwing (G1)
This is my first article for Wikipedia, so be mindful of that before you say hurtful things about poor grammar and/or spelling. That said, critisisms are welcome.
The content appears fine (if lacking in both his UK appearances, and a brief is needed on his Matrix Affinity, which is what set him apart.) the language is too informal/not detached enough for Wiki standards though. Also, calling US#75 'The Unicron Battle' is unnecessarily confusing, because the term has nother connotations in continuity.[User:Derik]
Truth be told, I don't have the issue with the Unicron Battle in it (I only have two of the Titan Book reproductions), so I wasn't sure what number it was. Let alone the actual title of the story, so I just went with something generic enough to tell when it happened.
But thanks for the comments.
