Talk:Longtooth

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Cleanup

So yeah, this article could stand some serious improvement, but I think deleting it would be a tad extreme. TVsGrady 00:18, 3 June 2007 (UTC)

It has one sentence. 22 words. Most of which are pronouns. It explicitly list shis function, which we don't do, and doesn't talk about his personality or his abilities. It calls his altmode 'some sort of car,' which isn't even correct, he's an amphibious transport! 22 words, minus pronoins, minus function, minus incorrect information leaves the word 'Walrus-man'. -Derik 00:30, 3 June 2007 (UTC)